Etzoyil's aqua form

Name: Aqua Form
Magic Cost: 30
Duration: 3 posts
Element: Water
Requirements: Must be Etzoyil
Class: Offense
Advantages: Gains stamina and water attacks become more powerful.
Disadvantages: Attacks must be charged for more power is put into them
Description:



History: Etzoyil gained this form when he was in a tight situation with his tutor. He needed a shield and he went into this form. He used to spontaneously change but now is able to control it. He escaped the situation from the tutor and almost killed him. The only reason for that becuase the tutor was shocked.

I see that you have your class as Defense, that's fine, but for your advantages you have an increase in power of water attacks. You may want to think of changing the Class to Offense, or you may keep it as Defense and add some defensive advantages to what you already have. Either way it looks fine and I'll approve when you edit.